Amy:
Q. What will you do on next summer vacation?Better:
Q. What will you do on your next summer vacation?
A. I will stay at home with my elder sister and l will go to the school library.I will read some books there and borrow 2 books. During my stay at home, I will do my homeworks in Math and English. I want to go on a trip with my family. Then, I will eat many delicious foods and play.
Q. Why do you like Harry-Potter?
A. I like Harry-Potter because he is very brave and he can do magic very well in the movie. He killed a villain, Voldmote. A long time ago, Voldmote killed Harry-Potter's parents and many people. Harry-Potter has 2 friends and he is so kind in the movie.
Explanations:
1. Please remember this structure when you are telling about a future action.
Subject + WILL + Verb (present form)
2.Use the present form of verbs when you are talking about a story.
Comment:
Thank you for submitting your homework Amy! I'm glad to know that your are fond of reading Harry Potter books. Well done!