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작성자 : ivy*** · 2015-01-29
A. I will stay at home with my elder sister and l will go to the school library. So I will read some books there and borrow 2 books. During my staying home, i will doing my homework. Math, English. I want to go trip with my family. Then, i will eating many delicious food and i will playing.
Q. Why do you like Harry-Potter?
A. I like Harry-Potter because he was very brave and he did magic very well in the movie. He killed villain, Voldmote. A long years ago, Voldmote killed Harry-Potter's parents and he killed many people. Harry-Potter had 2 friends and he was so kind in the movie.
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Amy:
Q. What will you do on next summer vacation?A. I will stay at home with my elder sister and l will go to the school library. So I will read some books there and borrow 2 books. During my staying home, i will doing my homework. Math, English. I want to go trip with my family. Then, i will eating many delicious food and i will playing.
Q. Why do you like Harry-Potter?
A. I like Harry-Potter because he was very brave and he did magic very well in the movie. He killed villain, Voldmote. A long years ago, Voldmote killed Harry-Potter's parents and he killed many people. Harry-Potter had 2 friends and he was so kind in the movie.
Better:
Q. What will you do on your next summer vacation?
A. I will stay at home with my elder sister and l will go to the school library.I will read some books there and borrow 2 books. During my stay at home, I will do my homeworks in Math and English. I want to go on a trip with my family. Then, I will eat many delicious foods and play.
Q. Why do you like Harry-Potter?
A. I like Harry-Potter because he is very brave and he can do magic very well in the movie. He killed a villain, Voldmote. A long time ago, Voldmote killed Harry-Potter's parents and many people. Harry-Potter has 2 friends and he is so kind in the movie.
Explanations:
1. Please remember this structure when you are telling about a future action.
Subject + WILL + Verb (present form)
2.Use the present form of verbs when you are talking about a story.
Comment:
Thank you for submitting your homework Amy! I'm glad to know that your are fond of reading Harry Potter books. Well done!