Gloria: Drawing pictures, write a stories, buy Red Velvet's goods, watch School OZ, read a book... are makes me happy.
Correct: Drawing pictures, writing stories, buying Red Velvet's products or merchandise, watching School OZ and reading books these are the things that make me happy.
Explanation:
a. Try to organize your thoughts and express yourself more.
b. The sentence was just rephrased.

Hello, Gloria! Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a good job. See you tomorrow! Have a good night! Take care! ^^

~ Teacher Belle.