Hello, Woohyun! Thank you for sharing about your experience today!

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Today,(Thursday) I got up at 7:30. It was a little bit later than I usually get up. Then, I ate breakfast. It was delicious. And I went to school. It took about 15 minutes. I read a book for few minutes. Then I(we) studied history(Korean history). Studying history is fun.(Or, maybe because our teacher teaches me (and my friends) well.) Next, we studied Science. Being the first time after vacation, we had quizes about constellation. It was fun too. Next class was English class. We had a game. It's about asking "I'm looking for jeans.". It was easy, but we had fun. Next, we learned how to cross stitich. At first, it was hard and boring. But, it became fun. Then we had lunch.
Well, do you like my Thursday? I think I like this Thursday. I hope next Tuesday will like this Thursday. See you next time.

CORRECT:

It's Thursday! I got up at 7:30. It was a little bit later than I usually get up. Then, I ate breakfast. It was delicious. Then I went to school. It took about 15 minutes. I read a book for few minutes. Then I had my Korean history class. Studying history is fun. (Or, maybe because our teacher teaches me (and my friends) well.)? Next, we studied Science.? Being the first time after vacation, we had quizzes about constellation.? It was fun too. Next class was English class. We had a game. It's about asking "I'm looking for jeans.". It was easy, but we had fun.? Next, we learned how to cross stitch. At first, it was hard and boring. But, it became fun. Then we had lunch.

Well, do you like my Thursday? I think I like this Thursday. I hope next Tuesday will like this Thursday. See you next time.

EXPLANATION:

Please study the corrections of your composition.?Take note of ?the spelling of the words quizzes, and stitch. And is a conjunction? that connects to sentences. Then is an adverb showing time and synonymous with Next, so this is appropriate to use in indicating time when you went to school.

Mostly,
Well, you were able to compose your?own?journal today about your?experiences. Just keep it up and have fun!?See you in the class!

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T. Lucy