회원가입 로그인

학습방

원어민 일대일 맞춤 회화 수업 토크펀! 영어 정복의 꿈을 이루세요!

영작문첨삭

Homework

작성자 : yoo***   ·   2015-01-28

TITTLE : Sorry
Today, I learned the English in the Talk Fun.
I prepared get out the classroom. My teacher talking when I press the close button. I unexpected. I feel sorry to teacher. Teacher Vicky!
I'm sorry♥ I was mistake.

답변

Emily: TITTLE : Sorry
Correction: TITLE: Sorry
Explanation: Always check your spelling.

Emily: Today, I learned the English in the Talk Fun.
Correction: Today, I learned English in Talk Fun.
Explanation: No need to add "the".

Emily: I prepared get out the classroom.
Correction: I prepared TO get out OF the classroom.
Explanation: Take note of the added words in order to make a sentence complete.

Emily: My teacher talking when I press the close button.
Correction: My teacher WAS talking when I PRESSED the close button.
Explanation: Be wary of the use of past tenses to indicate the situation that happened.

Emily: I unexpected.
Correction: I WASN'T EXPECTING IT.
Explanation: I rephrased your sentence to make it proper.

Emily: I feel sorry to teacher. Teacher Vicky!
Correction: I feel sorry FOR MY teacher. Teacher Vicky!
Explanation: "For" is used to mean because of.

Emily: I was mistake.
Correction: IT was MY mistake.
Explanation: Indicate the mistake with "it".


Hello, Emily! Thank you for your homework. It's okay! It's no problem. Teacher is not mad. I understand. ^^ Just take note of your corrections and keep up the good work! - Teacher Vicky

목록으로