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작성자 : cut***   ·   2015-01-27

Hello, Teahcer Joanna? I`m Hazel.

2014.8.18

1. Pacific Ocean
2. Island
3. Asia
4. South America

2014.9.19

1. fell into
2. counting
3. wear
4. pairs
5. skip-counting
6. straw
7. sticks
8. bricks

<Homework>

(Today)
1. Passport: It will help you to visit other countries.
2. Airplane ticket: It will help you to ride an airplane.
3. Suburbs: Houses located on the outskirts of a city.
4. Liberty: Freedom of choice.

"Here, Teacher Joanna. This is my homework."
And see you on Wednesday, Bye bye Teacher Joanna~!

(And thank you to teach me.)

From=> CuteHazel~^^

답변

HAZEL: Hello, Teahcer Joanna ? I'm Hazel.

CORRECT: Hello, Teacher Joanna! I'm Hazel.

>>Be mindful of the correct spelling of words. For greetings, a punctuation mark (!) is usually used at the end of the sentence. A question mark (?) is used for questions.

(TODAY)

HAZEL: Passport: It will help you to visit other countries.

CORRECT: Passport: It will help you visit other countries.

HAZEL: Airplane ticket: It will help you to ride an airplane.

CORRECT: Airplane ticket: It will help you ride an airplane.

>>Prepositions are unnecessary.

HAZEL: Suburbs: Houses located on the outskirts of a city.

CORRECT: Suburbs are houses located on the outskirts of a city.

HAZEL: Liberty: Freedom of choice

CORRECT!

"Here, Teacher Joanna. This is my homework."
And see you on Wednesday, Bye bye Teacher Joanna~!

CORRECT!

HAZEL: And thank you to teach me.

CORRECT: And thank you for teaching me.


COMMENT:
Hi, Hazel! Thank you very much for sending me your homework. I am glad to know that you've learn a lot form our classes. See you soon, Hazel!
-Teacher Joanna ^_^

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