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- MY FAVORITE TV PROGRAM -

작성자 : csu***   ·   2015-01-26

My favorite TV program is HEALER. Because it's sound is very fun and true to life. It's very impress so i like this TV program. HEALER is good person and
bully are attack and fight so police want to catch HEALER.

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KEVIN: My favorite TV program is HEALER.

CORRECT: My favorite TV program is the "Healer".

EXPLANATION: Use the article "the" to specify the title of something.


KEVIN: Because it's sound is very fun and true to life.

CORRECT: It's very fun and it seems to be true to life story.

EXPLANATION: The word "because" is a conjunction (a word that is used to connect phrases or parts of a sentence) Therefore we should use this to connect phrases or sentences but not a starting word to a sentence. 

KEVIN:It's very impress so i like this TV program.

CORRECT: It impresses me a lot ,so I like this TV program.


KEVIN: HEALER is good person and  bully are attack and fight

CORRECT: The "healer" is a good person but he is being bullied so he/she fights back.


KEVIN: so police want to catch HEALER.

CORRECT: The police want to catch the "Healer".

    

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