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작성자 : hsj***   ·   2015-01-23

2015.January.23th
Title:guitar
I had guitar class today.I was very excited.
Because i love guitar and I can play the guitar well.
So when I have free time, I play the guitar.
Today I learn about guitar skill,'mute' with a guitar.
It was so hard. so I was scoled by the guitar tutor.
It was difficurlt for me to make a sound.
I will practice so hard to play the guitar very well.

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 2015.January.23th

Title:guitar

I had guitar class today.I was very excited.

Because i love guitar and I can play the guitar well.

So when I have free time, I play the guitar.

Today I learn about guitar skill,'mute' with a guitar.

It was so hard. so I was scoled by the guitar tutor.

It was difficurlt for me to make a sound.

I will practice so hard to play the guitar very well.


CORRECT:

2015 January 23rd

Title: Guitar

I had guitar class today. I was very excited

because I love guitar and I can play the guitar well.

So when I have free time, I play the guitar.

Today, I learned about guitar skill, 'mute' with a guitar.

It was so hard so I was scolded by the guitar tutor.

It was difficult for me to make a sound.

I will practice so hard to play the guitar very well.


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