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작성자 : yoo***   ·   2015-01-25

Tittle : Favorite clothes
I went to the 2001 Outlet with my family.
We look around store to buy clothes.
And, I found my favotie clothes.
It was blank skiny pants. And, I found a black shirt.
But, It was not man-to-man. I liked them.
My parents bought them.
I wanted a adidas jersey. But, There were small size in the adidas store.
Therefore, my parents bought other brand's similar jersey,
I felt great!

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Tittle: Favorite clothes

I went to the2001 Outlet with my family.

We lookaround store to buy clothes.

And, I found myfavotie clothes.

It was blankskiny pants. And, I found a black shirt.

But,It was not man-to-man. I liked them.

My parents boughtthem.

I wanteda adidas jersey. But, Therewere small size in the adidas store.

Therefore, myparents bought other brand's similar jersey,

I felt great!


TITLE: Favoriteclothes

I went to the 2001Outlet with my family.

We lookedaround the store to buy clothes.

And, I found myfavorite clothes.

It was blackskinny pants. And, I found a black shirt.

But, it was notman-to-man. I liked them.

My parents boughtthem.

I wanted anAdidas jersey. But, only small sizes are available in theAdidas store.

Therefore, myparents bought other brand's similar jersey.

I felt great!


>>Be mindfulof the correct spelling of words. Be consistent with the propertenses of the verb. Use past tense to refer to things that happenedin the past. Only the first word starts with a capital letter, unlessit is a proper noun. Proper nouns always begin with a capital letter.Use article 'an' for nouns that begin with a vowel sound.


Hello, Emily! Thank you for your homework! You did a very good job and I like your style! And I didn't know you like to wear a jersey. That's cool! Keep it up, Emily! - Teacher Vicky

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