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homework - My hobbys

작성자 : kir***   ·   2015-01-23

I have two hobbys.
One is playing chess.
Playing chess makes me happy and it's fun.
And one is playing video games.
Playing video games are fun and makes me happy too.

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Hello, Kirby! Thank you for passing your homework! Hobbies are really fun to do. I'm planning to do one of my hobbies later on my free time. How about you? Share in our class what you are going to do today! Kindly read and study the corrections below. If you have any
questions, feel free to ask me in class. Thank you, Kirby! Enjoy your weekend!

~ Teacher Mary


I have two hobbies. One is playing chess. Playing chess makes me happy and it's fun. The
other is playing video games. Playing video games is fun and it makes me happy too.

1.
I have two hobbies.
Explanation: The plural form of hobby is hobbies.

2.
The other is playing video games.
Explanation:
a. In informal writing, some conjunctions such as because or and are used in
starting a sentence. However, to make the writing formal, we don't start with a conjunction.
b. Since you have used the word one when you mentioned playing chess as one of your hobbies, you may say the other for your next hobby so that you don't have to repeat the word one.

3.
Playing video games is fun and it makes me happy too.
Explanation:
a. The helping verb that should be used is is instead of are because the subject is playing video games and not the video games.
b. There should be a subject in your clause, makes me happy too so we put it's.
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