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작성자 : abr***   ·   2015-01-23

I ate bread, kalbi(beef) and saucage for dinner.
It was delicous.
I played swimming, piano and taekowdo.
I felt so hard.
I need super power.

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ABRAHAM'S HOMEWORK:

I ate bread, kalbi(beef) and saucage for dinner.
CORRECT!

It was delicous.
CORRECT!


I played swimming, piano and taekowdo.
CORRECTION: I played the piano, I studied taekwondo and I swam.
EXPLANATION: We need to always be reminded to choose proper verb for each activity that we do per day.

I felt so hard.
CORRECTION: It was so hard.
EXPLANATION: Be reminded about the definition of some words that you will use in your sentences because it might give your sentence a different menaing.

I need super power.
CORRECT!


COMMENT:
Hi, Abraham!
Thank you so much for sending me your homework. I am very glad to see your improvements. I hope to see you later in our class. Thank you and have a great day!
-Teacher Joanna

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