===CORRECTIONS===

Daine: My school name is cheng-youg school.
Correct: My school's name is Cheng-youg school.
Explanation: In possessive case of nouns add apostrophe s ('s) in the given noun to express ownership or possession.

Daine: I like to play with my friends and my little sisters and my little brothers.
Correct: I like to play with my friends and my little sisters and brothers.
Explanation: Always try to make simpler sentences in order for the listeners to understand it clearly and directly as much as possible.

Daine: I like to study everything beacause it is very fun to learn.
Correct: I like to study everything because it is very fun to learn.
Explanation: Always be careful with your word spellings.

                                         ===NOTES===

Hello, ! Thank you for submitting your homework! You did well, I hope that you're going to apply what is being asked on you with the following corrections for the improvement of your sentence constructions. Thank you! I'll see you in class!

~Teacher Carrie