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processed meat eating.

작성자 : shi***   ·   2015-01-22

Do you know what happens if we eat to much processed meat?
We become unhealthy and also have a cancer or early death. Processed meat is like , hot dogs, bacons, chickens, ham, salami. Which most of the people like.
We have to avoid them. eating them small amount is okay. And eating processed meat with vegetable is nice, too. And there are some foods that I reccomend for snacks.
1) carrot chips. - the carrot chips are like potatoe chips. That would be nice if we put in on a mug cup and eat.
2) sweet potatoes - Sweet potatoes is sweet like chocolates and it is healthy. If you eat it you will have energy.
3) anchobies - dryed anchobies are nice. It is tasted like cracker. They are salty.
Remember, that eating processed meat is nice. However, to a lot is unhealthy.

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Thank you for your homework, Julie! Just be mindful of the spelling of words. Good job!

Do you know what happens if we eat to much processed meat?
We will become unhealthy and also we can have a cancer or early death. Processed meat is like , hot dogs, bacons, chickens, ham, salami. Which most of the people like.
We have to avoid them. eating them on a small amount is okay. And eating processed meat with vegetable is nice, too. And there are some foods that I recommend for snacks.
1) carrot chips. - the carrot chips are like potato chips. That would be nice if we put in on a mug cup and eat.
2) sweet potatoes - Sweet potatoes is sweet like chocolates and it is healthy. If you eat it you will have energy.
3) anchovies - dried anchovies are nice. they taste like crackers. They are salty.
Remember, that eating processed meat is nice. However, to a lot is unhealthy.

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