Hello, Nate! Thank you for passing your homework. Your account of your
trip to the amusement park made me want to visit one again. I would like to try the rides except the roller coaster! I'm scared of the loops. Kindly read the corrections on your sentences. Thank you, Nate! I'll see you in class!

~ Teacher Mary 

I went to an amusement park named 'Everland' with my friends. First, I rode the Double Rock Spin. Second, I rode a pirate ship and third, I rode a roller
coaster. Then, I ate a hamburger and coke.

Explanation:
a. We should put the preposition to so that the direction is indicated.
b. We put a comma (,) after the words first, second, third and then to
separate them from the main idea in your sentence.
c. Since it happened in the past, the verb eat should be in the past tense.