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Alice: I went to zoo with my friend I saw the rabbit first.

Correct: I went to the zoo with my friend and I looked first for the rabbits.

EXPLANATION: Don't forget to use conjunctions such as "and" for connecting clauses for your sentences. Please choose the right verb for your sentence as well.

Alice: The zookeeper was feeding rabbit's fodder I want to take rabbit from my house

Correct: The zookeeper was feeding the rabbits and I want to take a rabbit and bring it home.

EXPLANATION: Never forget to use articles.

Alice: But zoo is her home and she is doesn't like me

Correct: But the zoo is her home and she doesn't like me.

EXPLANATION: Please avoid using unnecessary words.

Alice: so, I say to rabbit "Good bye, See you next time!!"

Correct: So, I say "Good bye and see you next time."

EXPLANATION: Please don't forget the rules of capitalization.

Alice: I went to saw the seal beacause I like seal very much!!

Correct: I looked for the seal because I like them very much!

EXPLANATION: Never forget to double checked your spellings.

Alice: I'm very sad because seal was can't go to they're own home.

Correct: I am very sad to know that those seal can't go to their own home.

EXPLANATION: Please, rephrase the whole sentence.

Alice: When I was growing up, i found seal and other animal's home!!!

Correct: When I grow up, I will look for the home of those seal.

EXPLANATION: Please take note of the verb tenses.