Alice:

It's true that women want to look more beautiful.
They are wearing short skirt in winter
even, they do plastic surgery for more beautiful.

Correct:

It's true that women want to look more beautiful.
They are wearing short skirt in winter
even, they do plastic surgery to be more beautiful.

Hi, Alice! Thank you so much for submitting your homework on Talk Fun! Well, you have a good opinion towards the given topic from our lesson. There's some pointers for you to review like using  prepositions and verbs. Mostly, you have a good point of view about your composition, Keep it up! See you again in class!