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homework to teacher Jhen

작성자 : sky***   ·   2015-01-21

To teacher Jhen:
Sorry this is late!
I asked my mom what kind of food is good for your body's good bacteria. She said: "I don't know" WHAT A DISSAPOINTMENT!!!!! So I was stuck with only cheese and milk, yougurt and other dairy foods. When I was little, I loved blue cheese. I ate for all my snacks. But now, I think it's stinky. EEWWWW!!!!!
I'll tell you more durring class.

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Hi Chloe,

        Thank you for submitting your homeowrk evben though it is due yesterday. Anyways, it is the effrort that counts. I am always proud of you because you no longer hesitate to voice out your ideas and feelings. You never fail to amaze me with your questions during class. Keep up the good work Chloe. :D

This is your correction:

I asked my mom what kind of food is good for your body's good bacteria. She said, "I don't know." WHAT A DISSAPOINTMENT!!!!! So I was stuck with only cheese, milk, yougurt and other dairy foods. When I was little, I loved blue cheese. I ate for all my snacks. But now, I think it's stinky. EEWWWW!!!!!
I'll tell you more durring class.

        Great job, Chloe! You just have to be aware of proper punctuations to use.

Love, teacher Jhen :D

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