Hi Claire,

        Thank you very much for submitting your homework. I really appreaciate it. I hope you will find time reading your corrections and study them. You are a very smart child, Claire. Don't be afraid to voice out your ideas.

This is your correction:

I served her healthy food, and water, in a glass, a straw and a tiny umbrella on top.

CORRECT: I served her some healthy food and water that's in a glass with a straw and a tiny umbrella on top.

I even gave her ice.

CORRECT: I even gave her some ice.

and I allways looked out for her.

CORRECT: And, I always looked out for her.

>>Be mindful of the correct spelling of a word.
A sentence begins with a capital letter.

Keep it up, Claire. I know you can do it.

Love, teacher Jhen :D