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작성자 : yoo*** · 2015-01-20
TITTLE : Go out
Today, I said good bye to my teacher Vicky over the Talk Fun class.
Suddenly, teacher shouted "Oh!" when I pressed the closing button.
Finally, I was out the classroom.
I was so fun. But, I checked my page. So, I write this diary.
I'm sorry teacher!
Today, I said good bye to my teacher Vicky over the Talk Fun class.
Suddenly, teacher shouted "Oh!" when I pressed the closing button.
Finally, I was out the classroom.
I was so fun. But, I checked my page. So, I write this diary.
I'm sorry teacher!
답변
Hello, Emily! I was going to say to not forget your homework, but you did your homework and that's good. And it's okay, Emily! Thank you for your homework and don't worry. ^^
Next time, the spelling should be "Title" not "Tittle". :)
Keep it up, Emily! - Teacher Vicky