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작성자 : als***   ·   2015-01-20

1. I like chocolate.because it is sweet.
2. I like the tea. because it is good for our health.
3. I like the cake. because It's soft and sweet.
4. I like bacon. because It's delicious.
5. I like apples. because It's delicious and sweet.

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                                      ===CORRECTIONS===

REMINDER:
** Your sentences ideas are all correct but you need to know and improve when it comes to conjunction and punctuation usage.
** CONJUNCTIONS - A word that is used to connect phrases or parts of a sentence. For example the words 'and', 'because', and 'although' are conjunctions.
** PUNCTUATIONS - the use of punctuation marks in writing so that people can see when a sentence begins and finishes, that something is a question, etc.

Dana: I like chocolate.because it is sweet.
Correct: I like chocolate because it is sweet.

Dana:  I like the tea. because it is good for our health.
Correct: I like drinking tea because it's good for our health.

Dana: I like the cake. because It's soft and sweet.
Correct: I like eating cake because it's soft and sweet.

Dana:  I like bacon. because It's delicious.
Correct: I like bacon because it's delicious.

Dana: I like apples. because It's delicious and sweet.
Correct: I like apples because it's delicious and sweet.

                                          ===NOTES===

Hello,Dana ! Thank you for submitting your homework! You did well, I hope that you're going to apply what is being asked on you with the following corrections for the improvement of your sentence constructions. Thank you! I'll see you in class!

~Teacher Carrie

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