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작성자 : sky***   ·   2015-01-20

The bandages were invented in 1924
The baseball were invented in 1744
jigsaw puzzle were invented in 1760
camera were invented in 1544
piano were invented in 1698
potato chips were invented in 1853


teacher Hmmm...... I think the bandages are not actually..
In google everthing was english and i founded very hard.
bye bye

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                                   ===CORRECTIONS===
REMINDERS:
**Always start your sentences in a capital letter and it should end with punctuation mark like period (.).
** We use "WAS" for past tense of singular be-form verb "IS" while "WERE" for the past tense of the plural be-form verb "ARE".

Robin: The bandages were invented in 1924
Correct: The bandages were invented in 1924.


Robin: The baseball were invented in 1744
Correct: The baseball was invented in 1744.


Robin: jigsaw puzzle were invented in 1760
Correct: The Jigsaw puzzle was invented in 1760.

Robin: camera were invented in 1544
Correct: The camera was invented in 1544.


Robin: piano were invented in 1698
Correct: The piano was invented in 1698.

Robin: potato chips were invented in 1853
Correct: The potato chips were invented in 1853.


                                          ===NOTES===
Hello,Robin! Thank you for submitting your homework! You did well, I hope that you're going to apply what is being asked on you with the following corrections for the improvement of your sentence constructions. Thank you! I'll see you in class!


~Teacher Carrie

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