THE GREATEST AND FUNNIEST SHOPPING MALL

*You can try hiking boots. ( But that's not all!) And you can try them out on a hiking trail!!

*You can try a waterproof jacket. (But that's not all either!) And you can try that a rainstorm to make sure it is good!

CORRECT: *You can try a waterproof jacket. (But that's not all either!) And you can try that with a rainstorm to make sure it is good!

*You can try out a mountain bike. (Of course that's not all.) And you can try that on a Mountain Bike Test Trail around the store.

B.U.T The icing on the cake is...... a 64-foot climbing wall where you can try(test) climbing equipment!!

You can try them all!

Please come to our world's greatest shopping mall REI!

(Logo of REI) & (Picture of REI)

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