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작성자 : ddb***   ·   2015-01-20

soda-the good things of soda:You can feel refreshed and it tastes very swwet.
the bad things of soda:Their are many illnessess that can soda made,you can also be very fat and even die of diabetes mellitus!

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Soda-

the good things of soda:

You can feel refreshed and it tastes very sweet.
the bad things of soda: Their There are many illnesses that soda can make. can soda made,you can also be very fat and even die of diabetes mellitus!

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