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작성자 : kan***   ·   2015-01-19

I need cloths, food and house in the dessert island.
Because they are important to live.

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MAX: I need cloths, food and house in the dessert island.
Because they are important to live.

CORRECT: I need clothes, food and a house in the desert island because they are important to survive.

EXPLANATION:


Be mindful of your spelling.

The article a/an is used to modify non-specific or non-particular nouns.

A conjunction word should not be used to start a sentence, hence, we combined the two sentences.

Choose the appropriate word for your sentence. In this case, we used the word "survive" because it means "to continue to live or to exist, esp. after a dangerous event".


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Hello, Max! Thank you for submitting your homework! It's good that you know the specific things you need to survive. :D

I look forward to reading your next composition! Take care always!

Always cheering you on,
Teacher Kate


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