My father gives some people a ride on the street.
Explanation: Beware of spelling.
I feel very lonesome because of my score.

Students must listen to teacher's lessons.
Explanation: Notice is not appropriate for this sentence, hence listen to is used instead.
I saw the stranger man in the morning.
Explanation: In is used for a period of time.
My pencils suddenly vanished.
Explanation: Suddenly means quickly and not expected.

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