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Dear Teacher Joanna~^^

작성자 : cut***   ·   2015-01-16

Hello, Teacher Joanna? I'm Hazel.
You are my English teacher.
And you teach how to corret my mistakes.

You always told me that I should good artist, and good teacher.
You are my role model because you believe me. I want to be just like you.
And I love you, Teacher Joanna~^_^

From Hazel~^^


^_^ *_* +_+ $_$ #_# =_= %_% !_! ?_?

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HAZEL'S HOMEWORK:

Hello, Teacher Joanna? I'm Hazel.

You are my English teacher.

CORRECT!

HAZEL: And you teach how to corret my mistakes.

CORRECT: And, you teach me how to correct my mistakes.

EXPLANATION: Don't forget to put object of the verb in a sentence. Be mindful of the correct spelling of a verb.


HAZEL: You always told me that I should good artist, and good teacher.

CORRECT: You always tell me that I should be a good artist and a good teacher.
EXPLANATION: Be mindful of the proper verb tense.


HAZEL: You are my role model because you believe me.

CORRECT: You are my role model because you believe in me.

EXPLANATION: Don't forget to use prepositions.


I want to be just like you.

And I love you, Teacher Joanna~^_^

CORRECT!

From Hazel~^^

COMMENT:
Hello, Hazel! Thank you for sending me you letter. I am very happy to know that I am your role model. I hope that I always inspires you to be betterto reach your dreams. See you later and have a great Monday!
-Teacher Joanna ^_^

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