***CORRECTED COMPOSITION***
Today,Idrew a picture at art academy and i just stayed at home
I ate lunch bulgogi it was very great~
I arrangement my book And, I wipe off the dust
Now, I have a talkfun class I'm very liked my talkfun teacher
After the class, i meet my bestfriend and we eat meet
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Student: Today,Idrew a picture at art academy and i just stayed at home
Correct: Today, I drew a picture in my art academy class and after that I just stayed at home.

EXPLANATION:
Be careful with your spaces. Insteadt of saying at art academy use the preposition "IN". At is used to point out a specific place, when we are asking where we are or where someone is. Use "And then" to indicate what ation you did after the first action. Then do not forget your period every after each sentence.
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Student: I ate lunch bulgogi it was very great~
Correct: I ate bulgogi for lunch and it was great.

EXPLANATION:
The verb should be followed by the noun then the preposition and the time. Use the preposition "for" to indicate when did you eat your lunch. Then use the article conjunction "and" to connect the phrases. And again, don't forget your period every after each sentence.
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Student: I arrangement my book And, I wipe off the dust
Correct: I arranged my books and I wiped off the dust.

EXPLANATION:
Arangement is not a verb in the sentence so it should be arranged since it's past tense too. Also wipe should be in past tense so wiped. Then don't forget the period after the sentence.
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Student: Now, I have a talkfun class I'm very liked my talkfun teacher
Correct: Now, I'm having my TalkFun class and I like my TalkFun teacher very much.

EXPLANATION:
Since you're talking about the present it should hve -ing at the end of the verb so it should be "having". Then rephrase the sentence I'm very like my talkfun teacher", it should be I like my talkfun teacher very much. Do not forget the period once again.
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Student: After the class, i meet my bestfriend and we eat meet
Correct: After the class, I will meet my bestfriend and we will eat.

EXPLANATION:
Will indicated that the action is just about to happen so we use that since at the time you're saying that you'll meet your bestfriend after the class. Again use will to tell that the action is just about to happen in the future. You put will before the verb. Again, do not forget your period every after sentence.
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Hi Alice! This the corrected composition. Thank you for passing it on time. There are adjustments in  your composition so take note of the adjustments and for sure you will do better next time! Great job still and stay positive in learning! ~~

Study and have fun!

Lots of love,
Teacher Kathline <3