HOMEWORK OF EMMA:

EMMA: Super Men is a hero.
CORRECTION: Superman is a hero.
EXPLANATION: 'Men' is the plural form of 'man.'
                       'Superman' are two different words joined together.

EMMA: I will be brave. (CORRECT!)
EMMA: My teacher, Ms.tania is very strong. (CORRECT!)

EMMA: Joanna: I saw bears,lions,tigers,owl,ostrichs,giraffes,lamas,and elephant ect.
CORRECTION: Teacher Joanna, I saw bears lions,tigers,owl,ostrichs,giraffes,lamas,and elephant ect.
EXPLANATION: Using 'Joanna:' means I am saying a message.

EMMA: I saw many animals. (CORRECT!)

EMMA: But I went to the ride more than saw animals.
CORRECTION: But I went to the rides rather than seeing some animals.

COMMENT:
Hi, Emma!
Thank you for sending me your homework. GOOD JOB! you got more correct sentences than sentences that have grammatical errors. I compliment you for that. Please take note of teacher's correction and I will see you again next week! Have a great weekend!
-Teacher Joanna