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작성자 : abr***   ·   2015-01-15

I rode inline skate in the afternoon.
I practiced, practiced.
I felt so hard.

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ABRAHAM'S HOMEWORK:
I rode inline skate in the afternoon.
I practiced, practiced.
I felt so hard.

CORRECTION:
I rode inline skate in the afternoon. / I played inline skate in the afternoon.
CORRECT!

I practiced, practiced.
correction: I practiced and practiced until I get it right. / I practice skating.
explanation: We can't use the smae word again to emphasize the verb. On the other hand, you can use conjunction to emphasize what you did.


I felt so hard.
correction: I fell so hard.
explanation: Please be careful on choosing words for your snetences.
                 fell - is the past form of  the verb 'fall'
                 felt - is the past form of 'feel'


COMMENT:
Hi, Abraham!
Thank you very much for sending me your homework about what you did today. I am very happy to see your progress in your homework. Please keep it up and see you later in our class!
-Teacher Joanna ^_^

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