ABRAHAM'S HOMEWORK:
I rode inline skate in the afternoon.
I practiced, practiced.
I felt so hard.
CORRECTION:
I rode inline skate in the afternoon. / I played inline skate in the afternoon.
CORRECT!
I practiced, practiced.
correction: I practiced and practiced until I get it right. / I practice skating.
explanation: We can't use the smae word again to emphasize the verb. On the other hand, you can use conjunction to emphasize what you did.
I felt so hard.
correction: I fell so hard.
explanation: Please be careful on choosing words for your snetences.
fell - is the past form of the verb 'fall'
felt - is the past form of 'feel'
COMMENT:
Hi, Abraham!
Thank you very much for sending me your homework about what you did today. I am very happy to see your progress in your homework. Please keep it up and see you later in our class!
-Teacher Joanna ^_^