Thank you Sally for doing and submitting your homework.^^

Hi Mecca teacher!
Correct: Hi teacher Mecca!
>> The title of a person comes first before the name.

I finish my homework....
Correct: I finished my homework....
>> Use the past tense of the verb when you talked about the things that already happened.

1.I have a stomchache.because last night I ate some lots of ice cream.
Correct: I have a stomachache because last night I ate some  ice cream./ I have a stomachache because last night I ate lots of  ice cream./

>> Be mindful of the correct spelling. Only use a period ( . ) when the sentence is already finished. Some( few ) and lots of ( many )are contradicting words.

2.The master molded his slave like wax..
Correct: The master molded his slave  like a wax..
>> Use article " a "

3.My causin put his papers in the military...
Correct: My cousin submitted his papers in the military...
>> Be careful of the spelling. Submitted means to pass/give.

4.At our school it is illegal to haze freshmen....
CORRECT!

5.The patients were suffering in agonies of pain.....
Correct: CORRECT!