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I will wish for........

작성자 : jay***   ·   2015-01-14

I will wish for get materati model in my birthday...
Also change my bike too.
It's so small to me.

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Jayden: I will wish for get materati model in my birthday...
Correct: I will wish for a Maserati car on my birthday.


Jayden: Also change my bike too.
Correct: I want a new bike too.


Jayden: It's so small to me.
Correct: It's too small for me.


*We use the articles a and an before the subject. When the noun starts with a consonant like Maserati (starts with M), we use the article a. We use an for nouns that starts with the vowels: a, e, i, o, and u.

*We capitalize the first letter of Proper nouns. Maserati is the name of the car company so we should capitalize letter M.

*We use the preposition on for days and dates.

*Also is synonymous with too. We can't use both of them in a sentence.

*Too indicates a higher degree. You may use too to convey that your bike is very small for you to use.

*For is used to indicate that something belongs to you.

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Hello, Jayden!

Thank you very much for doing the homework I gave you. You tried your best to talk about your birthday wish and I appreciate that. Please review the corrections I gave you. Thank you and keep up the good work!

~Teacher Gayl :)

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