JULIE'S HOMEWORK:
I like to eat chocolate. Because, when it eats it,
to be sweet inside the side it is because is one impression.
And it makes people happy too.But eating too much,
then We can have a sweet tooth.

CORRECTION:
I like eating chocolate. When you eats it, it will give you a sweet and delicious taste inside your mouth in just one bite. It also makes people happy. But eating too much, might give you a tooth decay.

EXPLANATIONS:
1. Always choose the appropriate words for each sentences. Choosing the right words for your sentence will make your sentences more comprehensive.

2. Using the right pronoun for your sentences takes careful understanding on what your idea is.

3. Always remember the proper punctuation marks to use and the proper capitalization for your sentences.

COMMENT:
Thank you very much Julie for sending me your homework! I had fun reading your homework. In really like eating chocolate and that's how I easily understand your sentences. Please kepe up the good work and let's talk about your homework tomorrow. See you and take care!
-Teacher Joanna