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작성자 : hsj***   ·   2015-01-14

January.14th.2015
title: tooth correction
Today, I went to a dental clinic to get the tooth correction.
I was so worried about that because my friends said " It is hurt "
Now, I'm wearing the brace.Dentist said " you should wear that for two years."
But It's inconvenient.I can't adapt that. It's also very hurt.
I have the worst toothache in the world. so I can't eat food well.
I'm very sad now.

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Hello, Emily. Thank you for sharing what happened to you today. Yes, you are right. Wearing a brace is very painful. I'm planning to have braces but I've changed my mind because you told me that it was very painful. I think I couldn't bear the pain. Hehe Anyway, you have to eat proper food if you can. Don't just eat porridge because it lacks nutrients that your body needs. You might get sick and I don't like it. Take care! See you on Friday! :)




14th of January 2015




Title: Teeth Straightening




Today I went to a Dental Clinic to correct my crooked teeth. I was so worried about it because my friends said that it is painful. Now I'm wearing a brace. The dentist said that I have to wear it for two years. I think it's inconvenient and I can't adapt to it. It's also very painful. I feel like it is the worst toothache in the world! I can't eat food well. I feel sad now.

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