***CORRECTED COMPOSITION***

On saturday, I went to my cousin sister's act cute party
she was dancing let it go she was very cut
she smiling to me and she active in dancing
On sunday, l was just stayed at home and, I listen my favorite song
and sang a song my favorite song was when i was your man
It was not special weekend
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Student: On saturday, I went to my cousin sister's act cute party
Correct: On saturday, I went to my cousin's cute acting party.

EXPLANATION:
I get the idea of your sentence but the grammar is not right. Then, the sister of your cousin is also your cousin so no need to say the sister of my cousin. Then you used the base form of the verb act; it's supposed to be acting party.

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Student: she was dancing let it go she was very cut
Correct: She was dancing 'Let it go' and she was very cute.

EXPLANATION:
The first letter of the sentence should be in capital letter. You should have the conjunction AND to tell that the sentence is not yet done that you still have something more to say. Lastly, check your spelling for cute.

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Student: she smiling to me and she active in dancing
Correct: She was smilling at me and she was active in dancing.

EXPLANATION:
The first letter of the sentence should be in capital letter. We use at because it was directed to you.

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Student: On sunday,l was just stayed at home and, I listen my favorite song
Correct: On Sunday, I just stayed at home and listened to my favorite song.

EXPLANATION:
No need ot use was because you already made the verb past tense. Make sure the verbs are all in past tense because it was already done. Then make sure that Sunday starts with a capital letter because it is a proper noun.

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Student: and sang a song my favorite song was when i was your man
Correct: I sang my favorite song which is When I was your man.

EXPLANATION:
And is not appropriate as a start of a sentence so you can use I instead. No need to say you sang a son because you mentioned the title of the song.

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Student: It was not special weekend
Correct: It was not a special weekend.

EXPLANATION:
We should have the article A pointing to the  noun.

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Hello Alice! This the corrected composition. Thank you for always passing it. You did a good job here, just a few reminders and corrections for you so that next time you can make your sentences better. Keep it up and see you tomorrow! ^^

Study and have fun!

Lots of love,
Teacher Kathline <3