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작성자 : woo***   ·   2015-01-13

Finish the story

When Teardrop escaped, the police chased after him. But the Teardrop was too fast to catch. He kept driving. Then, He heard a sound from his pickup truck. He was in a hurry so he forgot to unlock the brakes. So the tire was on the fire. He poured some water on it. Just in time, the fire went off.But after a while, the police caught him.

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Woohyun:

Finish the story

When Teardrop escaped, the police chased after him. But the Teardrop was too fast to catch. He kept driving. Then, He heard a sound from his pickup truck. He was in a hurry so he forgot to unlock the brakes. So the tire was on the fire. He poured some water on it. Just in time, the fire went off. But after a while, the police caught him.

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Ending of the story

When Teardrop escaped, the police chased after him. But  Teardrop was too fast to catch. He kept driving. Then, He heard a sound from his pickup truck. He was in a hurry so he forgot to unlock the brakes. So the tire was on the fire. He poured some water on it. Just in time, the fire went off. But after a while, the police caught him.

Hello Woohyun. Thank you for submitting your homework on Talk Fun! Well, you have a good point of view in constructing the ending of the story from the unit. You've got it made. See you in class!

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