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작성자 : ssh***   ·   2015-01-12

I went to soccer.
I went to base ball.
I learn to play clarinet.
I went to church.

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Shawn

I went to soccer.
I went to base ball.
I learn to play clarinet.
I went to church.

Correct:

I played soccer and baseball. I also  learned to play the clarinet and I went to the church.

Hello Shawn! Thank you for submitting your homework. Well, it's great to know the things that you love to do. You could express your ideas well. For all that, I would like to suggest that you can simplify the sentences by making it a compound sentence and by  adding conjunctions. Mostly, you could compose your own sentences, just keep it up. See you in class!

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