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작성자 : had***   ·   2015-01-12

I think the nice place send weeked is amusement park
like everland and lotte world. Because the amusement park has a roller coaster. It is fast, exciting and cool. We can see a parade. The music in the parade is exciting.

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           I think the nice place spend weekend is amusement park
like Everland and  Lotte world. Because the amusement park has a roller coaster. It is fast, exciting and cool. We can see a parade. The music in the parade is exciting.

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Thank you for doing your homework, Eric, I hope I can visit Korea to experience different kinds of rides. ^^ 


Let us fix your sentence construction,Eric. Let's make it clearer and more interesting.

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   I think Amusement park is a nice place to spend weekend.  There are two popular Amusement Park in Korea namely: Everland and Lotte World. It is fun to go here because it has different kinds of rides which everyone will surely enjoy like, roller coaster, drop tower, extreme, caterpillar ride, and etc.

   It is very exciting and cool. There are also parades and their costumes are very beautiful.

  

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See you on Wednesday, Eric! Great job! ^^

 

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