A title : Playwith my a friend

Today, I playedwith Minkyung.

My friendname is Minkyung. We areplayed from 1 p.m. to 6 p.m.

We ate spagetti,noodles and hamberger. Wetalked too much and

saw my smartphone in my house. We wereto play clay in Minkyung's house.

I had lotof fun, today.

TITLE: Play withmy friend

Today, I playedwith Minkyung.

My friend'sname is Minkyung. We played from 1 p.m. to 6 p.m.

We ate spaghetti,noodles and hamburger. We talked too much and

used mysmartphone in my house. We went to play clay in Minkyung'shouse.

I had lotsof fun today.

CORRECT: If thereis a pronoun, no need to put an article. Be mindful of the correctspelling of a word. When we show who owns something or has a closerelationship with something, we use an apostrophe + s after the nameof the noun.

We don't 'see' oursmartphone, instead we play with it or use it.

Hello, Emily! Thank you for your homework. You did great! And I'm glad that you enjoyed playing with your friend, Minkyung and had lots of fun. Just take note of the corrections and you will do better next time. Keep it up, Emily! - Teacher Vicky