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작성자 : CHA***   ·   2015-01-09

1.I will buy all of the math thief series.
becaause,they are very funny.
And It's made funny math!
2.I will study hard 11years old.
Because,11years old,study it's difficult.
(Let's study hard0
3. Iwill go to the other countries.
Because,It is interesting.
(I like it^v^

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Bella: 1.I will buy all of the math thief series.
becaause,they are very funny.
And It's made funny math!
Correct: I will buy the all series of math thief because it's very funny. It's also have funny math activities.
Explanation:
a. The sentence was rephrased.
b. Don't begin your sentence with conjunctions - because, and.

Bella: 2.I will study hard 11years old.
Because,11years old,study it's difficult.
(Let's study hard0
Correct: I will study hard because I'm already 11 years old. Our lessons are very difficult. (Let's study hard).
Explanation:
a. Don't begin a sentence with conjunctions - a word that is used to connect phrases or parts of a sentence.
b. Be careful with your punctuation marks.

Bella: 3. Iwill go to the other countries.
Because,It is interesting.
Correct: I will go to other countries because it's interesting.
Explanation:
a. Be mindful with capitalization of words.


Hello, Bella! Good job for your homework. Very well said. Study the corrections that we have in here. Happy weekend. Take care always! ^^

~ Teacher Belle.

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