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Thank you, mom

작성자 : jim***   ·   2015-01-09

Hellow, my mom.
my name is kelly.
Tv is broken.
But, my mom is brouth a tv.
so, tv is duck butt.
Onemore time is Tank you.
I love my mom.

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Kelly:

Hellow, my mom.
my name is kelly.
Tv is broken.
But, my mom is brouth a tv.
so, tv is duck butt.
Onemore time is Tank you.
I love my mom.


Correct:

Hello, Mom.

Our TV got broken, but you've bought another one to replace the old TV model.

I would like to say, Thank you. I love you Mom.


Love, Kelly.


* I'm so happy for your improvement in our class Kelly. You're always happy and jolly in the class and you always listen to teacher. I know that if you keep doing a positive attitude in the class you will be more confident in using the English Language. Way to go Kelly^^. Teacher Lyn will always there to help you.


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