I went to the amusement park when I was in fourth grade. I rode a Viking and roller coaster with my friend.
It was very exciting. I want to go to the amusement park again.

> Keep in mind that be-verbs also connect fragments in sentences.
> Let's use the past form of the verbs since you talked about your past experience.
> Proper names should always be capitalized.

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Jenny,

You did your homework very quick! I'm glad to see improvements in your composition. Please take note of the corrections, though. Like you, I also dream of going to amusement park again!

See you tomorrow Jenny!