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작성자 : woo***   ·   2015-01-08

Hello? I'm Woohyun. I'll tell you about my today. I got up at 8. Then I read a book about math. It was interesting because It had many funny scenes. Next, I ate breakfast. Then, I had done my English homework. And I read a book again.This time, I read About Pinocchio.(Today, I don't have to go to the academy because it was short break of my academy.)And I will watch video and do my kumon.(As long as I can do it. Because I have 5 subjects. Each of them takes at least 15~20 minutes. It will be takes at least 1 hour for done all that subjects.(This is Today's amount). Today might be a boring day or busy day.Bye!

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Woohyun

Hello? I'm Woohyun. I'll tell you about my today's task. I got up at 8. Then I read a book about math. It was interesting because It had many funny scenes. Next, I ate breakfast. Then, I had done my English homework. And I read a book again. This time, I read About Pinocchio.(Today, I don't have to go to the academy because it was short break of my academy.)And I will watch video and do my kumon.(As long as I can do it. Because I have 5 subjects. Each of them takes at least 15~20 minutes. It will be takes at least 1 hour for done all that subjects.(This is Today's amount). Today might be a boring day or busy day.Bye!

Woohyun: It will be takes at least 1 hour for done all that subjects.(This is Today's amount

Correct:  It will take at least 1 hour to finish all these subjects. (These are my today's tasks.

Hi, Woohyun! Thank you for submitting your homework. It's  nice that you were able to share your daily tasks. Just please take a heed on the correction above. Please observe the use of modal verbs. Please use only one modal verb for example will, then just add the main verb take. Besides, use the infinitive "to" and add a main verb finish. Mostly, you were able to compose your own writing. Keep it up! See you in class. Thank you.

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