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My Plan this Weekend

작성자 : ste***   ·   2015-01-08

Iwas sick with cold.

so this weekend Iwill just stay in the house.


Inside the house,I will read books and I will watch some animaition and I will draw some pictures.


I'm going to send my weekend like this.

답변

correction:

 I was sick because of my cold so this weekend, I will just stay in the house.


Inside the house, I will read books and I will watch some animation and I will draw some pictures.


I'm going to spend my weekend like this.

Reminders:

> Be careful with your spelling.
> Be careful with your spaces.
> We use conjunctions to make the sentence more understandable.

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Hello Stella!

I want to thank you for sending me your homework! Great job! I want you to keep it up. Kindly review my corrections.

Goodnight!
Get well soon!


Teacher Jane ^^

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