Hello, Colin! Thank you for passing your homework. The things that you
said about your turtles make me want to play with them!
They sound so cute! Here are the corrections on the sentences that you
made.

1. My pets turtles are eat shrimp.

CORRECT: My pet turtles eat shrimp.

2. MY pets turtles are enjoy playing in the water.

CORRECT: My pet turtles enjoy playing in the water.

3. When my turtles are angry they are bite my finger.

CORRECT: When my turtles are angry, they bite my finger.

4. My pets turtles are have a small house on their back.

CORRECT: My pet turtles have a small house on their back.

5. My pets turtles are very slow.

CORRECT: My pet turtles are very slow.

>>The word 'pet' in your sentences is used as an adjective so it shouldn't be written with 's'. There should be a comma after a dependent clause. A dynamic verb (eat, bite, enjoy) indicates an action, process or situation so the
verb "are" shouldn't be used anymore in your sentences. A stative verb (be, have, know) describes a state, situation or condition.

Kindly study the sentences. Thank you, Colin! I'll see you in class!

~ Teacher Mary