Gloria: I woke up.
CORRECT!

Gloria: Next, I saw rising Sun .and I had breakfast with my family and my aunt
Correct: Next, I saw the rising Sun and I had breakfast with my family and my aunt.
EXPLANATION:

The definite article "the" is used before nouns when only one of something
exists.

 Avoid using conjunctions like BUT, AND, BECAUSE as the first word in a sentence because we use conjunctions to connect an incomplete thought to a complete one.

Gloria: and I skate with my cousin and my brother.
Correct: I skated with my cousin and my brother.
EXPLANATION:

 Avoid using conjunctions like BUT, AND, BECAUSE as the first word in a sentence because we use conjunctions to connect an incomplete thought to a complete one.

Gloria: I went my grandmother's house.
Correct: I went to my grandmother's house.
EXPLANATION: 

 The preposition "to" is used to indicate a direction, goal, or objective.

Gloria: I went back to my home. and I watched TV little bit
Correct: I went back home and I watched TV a little bit.

Gloria: Finally, I slept.
CORRECT!

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Great work, Gloria! Thank you for submitting your homework. See you tomorrow!

-Teacher Isabel