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작성자 : kwa***   ·   2015-01-06

Study)
I think I need to put more effort on the subject that I am not good at or don’t have enough background knowledge. For example, in History I have no idea when or who became the pharaoh and they he or she did in ancient Egypt. I will read more books (but I don’t have in my house) about history, science and geography if there are books which can help me studying.

Relationship with others)
I usually don’t make problems with friends so I don’t have any wishful thinking about relationship. But if I make new friends, I wish I can sort out if he or she is good or bad.

Myself)
I really want to grow taller. Most of my friends in Korea are between 160 to 170 or taller. Sometimes I really feel jealous of how they can grow that high. For extra, I want to stay more in China.

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Study)
I think I need to put more effort on the subject that I am not good at or don't have enough background or knowledge. For example, in History I didn't have an  idea when or who became the pharaoh and what they did in ancient Egypt. I will read more books (but I don't have in my house) about history, science and geography if these books could help me with my studies.

Relationship with others)
I don't  usually make problems with friends so I don't have any wishful thinking about relationship. But if I have new friends, I wish I can sort out if he or she is good or bad.

Myself)
I really want to grow taller. Most of my friends in Korea are between 160 to 170 or taller. Sometimes I really feel jealous on how they can grow that high. In addition, I want to stay longer in China.


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Hello Min!

Wow! This composition was long but I enjoyed reading this one. Anyway I know that all your wishes will come true in the future because of your good attitude and determination. Wish you all the Good luck this 2015. Goodnight.


Teacher Jane ^^

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