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작성자 : one***   ·   2015-01-06

my favorite musical instrument is harp.
Because harp make beautiful sounds.
I like that sounds.
If i have the time,I want learn play a harp.

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My favorite musical instrument is the harp.
Because the harp makes different beautiful sounds.
I like that sounds.
If I have the time, I want to learn how to play a harp.

Hi Justine,

Thank you for letting me know about your favorite musical instrument. Actually, I would also like to learn how to play the harp. It looks angelic to me. Anyway, I noticed that you forgot to capitalize the 1st letter of your sentence. Also, study how to use "indefinite clause" by forming the base form of the verb and the preposition "to". So please take note and study the corrections above. I hope you can apply those corrections in our class. See you in a bit!

Teacher Julie ^__^

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