Hello, Teacher Julie. I'm glad to meet you again today. We talked about parts of the plants last meeting. I was doing my homework while you were teaching other Korean students. The parts of the plants are stem, root, flower and leaves. Additionally, we get clear air, fresh food from plants even though we think that they are not important. Teacher Julie, do you think plants are not important?
The plants are very important living thing like people. I love plants. Have a good day! Goodbye! After all, plant is a very important living thing.
Hi Jack,
I am very happy that you were able to fully express your ideas in your composition today! Thank you for sharing something about the things that we get from plants and how important plants are for you. I also love plants, besides, we have a lot of plants at home as what I have told you.
Anyway, with regards toy our grammar construction, I want you still to study the corrections. These are the points that you have to study more: Tenses of verbs, articles and choice of words.
Overall, you did a good job today! Enjoy your weekend and see you again on Monday!
Teacher Julie