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작성자 : shi*** · 2014-12-24
2.memory > I think my favorite memory is when I went to the beach.
3.present > I want to get a game for my christmas present.
4.eggnog > Do you drink eggnog?
5.beverage > My anck is beverage
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Student : It is a precious ring I got from Santa
Correct : It is a precious ring I got from Santa.
Explanation : Don't forget to put a period after your sentence.
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Student : I think my favorite memory is when I went to the beach.
Correct : I think my favorite memory was when I went to the beach.
Explanation : You should use 'was' here because this happened in the past.
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Student : I want to get a game for my christmas present.
Correct : I want to get a game as my christmas present.
Explanation : We use the word 'as' here to give reason.
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Student : Do you drink eggnog?
Correct : Do you drink eggnog?
Explanation : CORRECT!
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Student : My anck is beverage
Correct :
Explanation : I think this sentence is incomplete.
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Hi Julie! I'm happy you were able to finish your homework fast. You only committed few grammar lapses and they are very minimal. Just keep in mind the corrections that you have and apply it to your sentences. I'll see again on Friday again. Merry Christmas!
~Teacher Louise 