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작성자 : 091***   ·   2014-12-24

I am Daniel and right now, a lots of things are happening.
My friend is playing with my LEGO and my mother is washing the clothes.
And of course, I'm doing my Talkfun homework right now.

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                              ***CORRECTED COMPOSITION***

I am Daniel and right now, a lots of things are happening.
My friend is playing with my LEGO and my mother is washing the clothes.
And of course, I'm doing my Talkfun homework right now.
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Student: ..a lots of things are happening.
Correct: a lot of things are happening.

EXPLANATION:
*A lot itself is considered many so you need to put "s" or you can say "..lots of things are happening."
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Student: ..and my mother is washing the clothes.
Correct: ..and my mother is washing our clothes.

EXPLANATION:
*It's better if we use possessives.
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Hello Daniel! This the corrected composition. Thank you for doing your homework. Good job, Daniel! Just a little adjustments but you  did a great job. ^^
Study and have fun!
Lots of love,
Teacher Kathline <3

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