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작성자 : dai***   ·   2014-12-23

fever=When I was a baby I was having many fever

flu shot= When it is a winter time it is easy to get a flu shot.

stomachache= Stomachache is very sickish.

spoild food = Spoild food is not healthy for us.

cold= If we have a cold we will have fever,and couf.

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                          ===CORRECTIONS===

Daine: When I was a baby I was having many fever
Correct: When I was a baby, I always have a fever.

Daine: When it is a winter time it is easy to get a flu shot.
Correct: During winter time, people usually get a flu shot.
**Flu shot - the medicine being injected to one's body to avoid having flu.

Daine: Stomachache is very sickish.
Correct: Having a stomachache is not good.

EXPLANATION:
Using more appropriate words in your sentences enables the listener to understand it better and directly.

Daine: Spoild food is not healthy for us.
Correct: Spoiled food is not healthy for us.

Daine: If we have a cold we will have fever,and couf.
Correct: If we have a cold, we usually have fever and cough.

EXPLANATION: Be careful with your word spellings.

                                  ===NOTES===

Hello Daine! Thank you for submitting your homework just in time, I hope that you're going to study well all the corrections that I've made in here and don't ever forget about it. Thank you again and I'll see you next meeting. ~Teacher Carrie

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